I spent part of the weekend making major revisions to the opening chapter of my first romantic comedy, Radio Red. I may or may not someday do this writing thing full time, but it won't be from a lack of trying.
It was the opening -- the inciting incident didn't happen fast enough, so I had to switch things around. Overall the rest of the story's in pretty good shape, though ...
Same here.
ReplyDeleteHugs and chocolate!
Keep flying!
DeleteMajor revisions can often be called for!
ReplyDeleteIt was the opening -- the inciting incident didn't happen fast enough, so I had to switch things around. Overall the rest of the story's in pretty good shape, though ...
DeleteLove the title!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I usually suck at titles, but that was the one for this book from the beginning.
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