In all the
fuss over the early release of The
Notorious Ian Grant, I forgot to update you about work on the rough draft
of my “space opera” story. I’m happy to say that, after the much-needed stress
relief of a few marathon writing sessions, the initial draft of Beowulf: In Harm’s Way is finished.
It’s 55,000
words of pure … roughness, and I’m sure it’ll be at least a few thousand words
longer by the time I’m finished. Just for the heck of it, I thought I’d share the
first moments of the opening scene, which takes place on the United Planets
warship CS-214—a craft so small the crew has to name it themselves.
Now, on to
the second draft. And the third, fourth, fifth ….
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A red light
shone out on the shuttle's control board.
Commander
Paul Gage leaned forward, his hands still on the little craft's controls. “What
did I do?”
Beside him,
Kurt Biermann shook his head. “Nothing, Skipper—that's a comm alert from the
bridge.”
“Well,
that's damned inconvenient when I'm trying to get certified as a shuttle
pilot.” Thank goodness they were parked in his ship’s shuttle bay, running a
simulation. Gage couldn't remember flying anything since … since the incident.
The real
pilot chuckled. “You know, a ship's captain doesn't have to know how to fly a
shuttle. Since I'm usually up at the helm, I'm the one who should be practicing
down here.”
“I ordered
cross-training, so I cross-train.” Gage punched the comm button. Lt. Biermann,
who no doubt hadn't expected to train anyone while running a shakedown cruise
in a ship with only forty-two crewmembers, looked relieved.
“Damage
control stations, all hands, we have a fire in engineering. This is not a
drill.”
While
Gage pushed the shuttle's door open and leaped out, he noticed Lt. Biermann no
longer looked relieved.
I like the excerpt!
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DeleteCertainly an exciting beginning. Write on!
ReplyDeleteWill do!
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